She was like one of those horses you couldn't tame, no matter, how hard you tried. She ran free. Right from when she was a kid, people tried their luck at taming her. Her dad, grandfather, aunt, uncle, everyone. But their persistence didn't pay. She ran faster every time they tried. Into the woods, into the wild.
She grew up and hoped for a liberal world outside. Waiting to engulf her into its arms. She held her breath and stepped out, but it wasn't long until she realized, it was all the same. Her tiny family represented a large section of the world. This wild child, for the first time, felt lost. The irony being, she was absolutely alone in a swarm of people. This became an obstacle in her running, for she had to go against the powerful crowd. But her brave heart gave her strength. As she ran faster she realized, some one was next to her. Running with her.
And for the first time she understood, she didn't need people to tame her, rather they couldn't. All they could do was run with her, into the wild.
She grew up and hoped for a liberal world outside. Waiting to engulf her into its arms. She held her breath and stepped out, but it wasn't long until she realized, it was all the same. Her tiny family represented a large section of the world. This wild child, for the first time, felt lost. The irony being, she was absolutely alone in a swarm of people. This became an obstacle in her running, for she had to go against the powerful crowd. But her brave heart gave her strength. As she ran faster she realized, some one was next to her. Running with her.
And for the first time she understood, she didn't need people to tame her, rather they couldn't. All they could do was run with her, into the wild.
10 opinions:
The last line just took my breath away. :)
" She needed someone to run with her, just as fast."
Y U SO BRILLIANT ? :C
a very good post. U seem to be lonely
@Vidhi: I not be brilliant! Why you put so big tag on me? :O :D
Adi: I'm not lonely. Read it again and try to get it ;)
got it rach.....
JUST AS FAST....
This was though provoking...and this cud have various interpretations too...made me think!
Glad it made you think. :)
Wowwwwwww Beautifully written =D love it :)
Thank you ^_^
loved your post. it is different, and nice! the last line is superb!
i think you'd like my writing too. its like yours in a way. here, go through this one.http://audereagereauferre.blogspot.com/2011/06/memories.html
lets follow each other? :)
That was a very good post Diksha! :)
Post a Comment