Jan 9, 2012

The Wild Child.

Penned down by Rachana Vaidya at 1:47 AM
         She was like one of those horses you couldn't tame, no matter, how hard you tried. She ran free. Right from when she was a kid, people tried their luck at taming her. Her dad, grandfather, aunt, uncle, everyone. But their persistence didn't pay. She ran faster every time they tried. Into the woods, into the wild.
         She grew up and hoped for a liberal world outside. Waiting to engulf her into its arms. She held her breath and stepped out, but it wasn't long until she realized, it was all the same. Her tiny family represented a large section of the world. This wild child, for the first time, felt lost. The irony being, she was absolutely alone in a swarm of people. This became an obstacle in her running, for she had to go against the powerful crowd. But her brave heart gave her strength. As she ran faster she realized, some one was next to her. Running with her.
       And for the first time she understood, she didn't need people to tame her, rather they couldn't. All they could do was run with her, into the wild.

10 opinions:

Vidhi on Jan 9, 2012, 1:58:00 AM said...

The last line just took my breath away. :)
" She needed someone to run with her, just as fast."

Y U SO BRILLIANT ? :C

Adi on Jan 9, 2012, 2:05:00 AM said...

a very good post. U seem to be lonely

Rach on Jan 9, 2012, 2:09:00 AM said...

@Vidhi: I not be brilliant! Why you put so big tag on me? :O :D

Adi: I'm not lonely. Read it again and try to get it ;)

Adi on Jan 9, 2012, 2:12:00 AM said...

got it rach.....

Red Handed on Jan 9, 2012, 9:53:00 PM said...

JUST AS FAST....
This was though provoking...and this cud have various interpretations too...made me think!

Rach on Jan 9, 2012, 11:16:00 PM said...

Glad it made you think. :)

Aliza Khan on Jan 10, 2012, 6:31:00 PM said...

Wowwwwwww Beautifully written =D love it :)

Rach on Jan 11, 2012, 7:53:00 PM said...

Thank you ^_^

Diksha Sharma on Jan 26, 2012, 5:14:00 PM said...

loved your post. it is different, and nice! the last line is superb!
i think you'd like my writing too. its like yours in a way. here, go through this one.http://audereagereauferre.blogspot.com/2011/06/memories.html
lets follow each other? :)

Rach on Jan 31, 2012, 11:35:00 AM said...

That was a very good post Diksha! :)

 

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